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The little house seemed completely abandoned, surrounded by frozen flowers, the door wasn't locked by key. The eerie atmosphere and the sub-freezing temperature in the house would give chills to anyone. A pair of boots laid in the entrance hall, and a coat was thrown onto the low bench. The kitchen was interconnected with the living room. The fire in the small fireplace was out a long time ago, as it could be judged by the light grey color of the fine ash. A few clothes laid on the couch, a pair of dark blue, ripped jeans, a grey sweater, a wrinkled shirt and a scarf. There was a thin crystal vase on the kitchen counter, with two withered daffodiles. The door of the bathroom was slightly opened, it was hard to open it wider, the hinges were frozen. A young boy laid in the bathtub, with purple-greyish blemishes on his pale skin. His ash-blonde hair fell into his face, it shimmered of frost, the tears were frozen on his light-coloured lashes. His left arm hung down by the rim of the tub, the tip of his pinky finger implied the puddle of blood beneath, a deep, narrow cut ran along his wrist. He held a razor blade in the other hand. The water reached his chest, it was frozen in a thin layer. The sight was extremely clear and untouched, like a field of snow. He hadn't written a farewell letter or a log entry, he just silently walked away to the other side without a trace.
Just a short story about Iceland committing suicide.
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:iconcrazedweido90:
crazedweido90 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
notgannahavenightmaresnotgannahavenightmaresnnotgannahavenightmares
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RockstarMichiyo Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Professional General Artist
sure... not.
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ScottPilgrimIsJesus Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
This is beautiful~

I seem to have a thing for short stories of characters killing themselves... Just what is wrong with me...? :/
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RockstarMichiyo Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Professional General Artist
there's nothing wrong with you, I like them too 8D
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ScottPilgrimIsJesus Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Mkay, good. xD
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Thorn-Irken Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
zomg D: its so sad yet touching
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rioIu Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifully written. I really love these kinds of stories and would like it if I could write one myself -- really in character in my opinion.
The only other mistake is the coat was thrown, not threw. ^^
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RockstarMichiyo Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Professional General Artist
oh, thank you. I tried my best. ^^
And I corrected my mistake also.
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runningrame Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Professional General Artist
humm..

most pontosan kiről volt szó?
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RockstarMichiyo Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Professional General Artist
Izlandról. Ő az én Kennym, mindig kicsinálják
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